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 BeccsLaw |
Trashing "CROOKED"! |
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Posts: 2 (03/02/08 14:52:51) |
Anybody feeling...CROOKED?
I'm on page 37, and I've already written nearly two pages of notes. Got an appointment. Got to go... Man~ana |
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I felt.....CROOKED! | ||
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Posts: 69 (03/03/08 06:26:08) |
I have not seen CROOKED. HOWEVER I just finished viewing the trailer. And I must say…you're absolutely right "the script went through some changes on the way to the screen." I enjoyed reading the script. I didn't love it. And I'll tell you why. On page 74 Latimer sleeps with Lynn. On page 84, he refers to her as "the girl". That weakened his character for me. And that's why. ALSO I have to admit, I can only take a few bullets…and then I'm counting the minutes
WHICH BRINGS ME TO, my favorite line… "I am completely under caffeinated for this kind of shit." BUT Who, what, why…hit (WHAM!) Yordan in the back, on page 77? PINKY RING? Since I heard about it twice, I thought there would be some significance. I'm going to get the movie…get me a big bowl of popcorn, and an ice cold…coca-cola.
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Posts: 147 (03/04/08 13:04:53) |
Trashing "CROOKED"! Nice to see you are sticking to constructive criticism... |
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Posts: 3 (03/04/08 14:39:14) |
weapons are available wrote:
Weapons, You look SO familiar. I mean I never forget a face (or photo.) Or could it be that tongue? hmmm...No. It's definitely the face.
What are your thoughts on CROOKED? Have you read the script/seen the film? |
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